Sunday, 24 November 2013

Writing Term 4

I am learning to: Describe a sea creature from the story Commotion in the Ocean.

What I need is: 
Describing words
What the animal is
What the animal looks like
What the animal does


It looks like a scary animal. It lives in the bottom of the ocean. It is a shark. It eats people and it is white. My shark fights with a swordfish. I feel sad because it eats people.


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