Writing Term 4

I am learning to: Describe a sea creature from the story Commotion in the Ocean.


What I need is: 

Describing words

What the animal is

What the animal looks like

What the animal does

Shark

It looks like a scary animal. It lives in the bottom of the ocean. It is a shark. It eats people and it is white. My shark fights with a swordfish. I feel sad because it eats people.

Sophie